Thursday, December 1, 2011

Abortion Can Be Positive and Be Negative


Evidence -Concrete Detail:
  • Abortion leads to the end of life, but I admit I have trouble thinking that extinguished life as an actual person.
  • Commentary 1: The egg is alive.
  • The sperm is alive also.
             Abortion is alright under certian circumstances.
  • Simply because accidents happen.
  • Rape happens and women alot of times get pregnant by these men who impregnate them and the woman isnt able to have the baby, and or the woman cant have them kids because it could mess up theire careers. etc.

Opposing Claims/They Say:

  • Abortion is horrible it is ruthless, and heartless.


My Rebuttal/I Say:
  • Under certian circumstances it is alright to me. But, for like rape reasons, or other reasons. However; if someone did get an abortion, they should be able to get one like once every two years because some people just get pregnant not using a prophylactic and being careless.
My Paragraph
  • Abortion can be positive and be a negative Concord, abortion leads to the end of a life, but I admit I have trouble thinking of that extinguished life as an actual person  because the egg is alive and the sperm is alive also, however Its alright only under certian circumstance simply becasue accidents happen and rape happens alot of woman have kids with basically strangers.
  • They say that abortion is horrible and it is ruthless and heartless. It really just depends on how you look at it but me personally I think it goes either way.

Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Remembering 9.11

At around Ten years ago. I was in the first grade, something very bad happened to our country. Terrorist hi-jacked one of our planes and at the time I wasnt sure what was going on at the time because I was only in the first grade but I knew it wasnt good that all of my teachers were crying. The plane crashed in to the World Trade Center which didnt mean alot to me because I was in the only a kid. That day; changed America.

Tuesday, September 27, 2011

War Is...

War is needed, protecting our rights.
War is fighting, fighting for freedom.
War is unimaginable, freaking real.
War is ghory, killing alot of loved ones.
War is deplorable, leaving loved ones behind.
War is evil, knowing that it isnt right; its still being done.
War is pointless, helping nothing.
War is sad, remembering the people killed in 9/11.
War is destructive, destroying peoples lives.
War is praying, dying lost souls.

Thursday, September 15, 2011

book review for the book "touching spirit bear'

The book I am reading is called "Touching Spirit Bear'' It is about a boy named Cole Matthew who happens to be a troubled 15 year old who is always into stuff and always up to no good Cole Always had a anger problem and one day he got in a fight with a kid named peter because Peter told on him for some thing that he did. so Cole Matthews has a choice between prison Native American Circle Justice. He chose The Native American Circle Justice; Well the first couple of days he is being followed by a hungry white bear and it nearly kills him! Cole comes to the conclusion that he is going to die. In order to find out what is going to happens to little Cole Matthews you should definitely read this book, you will surely enjoy it.